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Sunlit Back [Famitracker MMC5] (demo)

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Sunlit Back [Famitracker MMC5] (demo)

By MortalWombat on May 1, 2012 7:52 pm

Work in progress, tell me what you think.

Also note: This is my third proper attempt at Famitracker. I used to upload on 8bc.org, but at the moment it's down. I haven't been very active either and you'd do well to assume this probably won't be completed hahaha. I'm a horrible procrastinator.

I don't have any knowledge in musical theory apart from some chords(which sometimes I have to look up lol), I don't play any instruments and I am not very experienced. Please keep that in mind if you're going to critique(which is more than welcome).

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

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May 3, 2012 1:50 pm

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roboctopus

Hey MortalWombat.  I remember you.  Good to see you're getting back into it. The best way to learn is just to make a lot of music, really.

This is a nice relaxing piece. I liked the drum beat, it has a nice offbeat feel to it.  I think the chords/harmony instruments are a bit too loud - they overtake that nice bassy lead.  Try turning them down.  And keep at it!

May 1, 2012 9:55 pm

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MegaMantra

Enjoyed it overall.  The sound of it is unique and pleasant - I love the simplicity of it.

Criticism time: the chords in the background when the drums came in felt a bit too harsh and dissonant.  They clashed with the soft melody and sort of overwhelmed the other sounds.  The sound of the drums was great, but the actual beat felt a bit off. 

Heck, I don't know the first thing about musical theory (not even the chords tongue) and I'm still plugging away at LSDJ and the like.  I like what you've got so far smile

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